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Comment on Jett's blog

https://1025jett.blogspot.com/2017/02/poem.html?showComment=1487902128684#c7064460062653006991

Comment on Max's blog

https://mhr416.blogspot.com/2017/02/prospering-man.html?showComment=1487902216992#c7704984642764081748

Vocab post

Once there was a hairy little boy know as Ted. One day Ted deemed going out and exploring at night a good idea and did so. On his exploration Ted saw an opening to the sewer. Ted was curious and decided to explore the sewer like Idubbztv during Legit Food Review. After five minutes of exploring Ted saw a dim light around a corner. Ted peers the corner and sees none other than the Tattletale Strangler, and indicted killer. 

Ted was so mortified that he ran as fast as he could out of the sewer. When Ted made it all the way back to his house his parents gave him quite the censure. Ted learned his lesson about sneaking out and exploring during the night. Now Ted is a smarter and wiser person because of his experience.

Poem

I sit in my seat

 and set my silverware.

I prepare for a feast.

I am greeted hello

by the waffle's aura.


I am engulfed

Into the waffle.

The waffle is engulfed

Into me.

Until it is

No more.




Personification, Sibilance, and euphony.

comments 2-9-17

Honeycutt-

https://johnhenglish1block3.blogspot.com/2017/02/research.html?showComment=1486690949913#c4196156192878936021

James-

https://jamescblogpost.blogspot.com/2017/02/research.html?showComment=1486691120386#c1164324012638325791

Research

One skill that I have learned through this project is to find and use the information found in sources more efficiently. In other words I can better use and organize raw information. Another skill I have gained is that now I can better organize my thoughts in an arguable arrangement. I fell like these new skills will help me to be a much better writer down the line.

The one aspect of the project that I am unfaithful in is the presentation for history. I didn't really get enough information on it for what I was originally planning. I am also worried about the quality of my presentation in comparison to those of others. I feel like we didn't get enough time to work on it as well.

Reading response

TATPTDOPTI is a honesty a fun book to read. I enjoy the tone of the book. Its a lightly toned book with few but really powerful moments of seriousness. I am very close to finishing it and look forward to the ending. Also I think

I also really enjoy the plot. I think the concept of a sort of outcast becoming the outcast of a society of outcasts an amusing topic. Also knowing that the events in the book are based off of true events and the writers life makes the story feel much more realistic and intuitive. The cartoon drawing also add to the connection we feel with the main character. Also I think Diary of a Wimpy Kid copied this book.

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Alex W's blog

https://blogsgotjokes.blogspot.com/2017/01/being-in-high-school.html?showComment=1486087421825

https://sutterenglish1.blogspot.com/2017/02/research.html?showComment=1486088079291#c8825750419079558108

Sutter's blog